I believe that the target market is 16-26 year old females I anticipate seeing the following artists; Mcfly, Scouting For Girls, Jessie J To improve have you considered putting your colour scheme for your magazine in your pitch.
Very good, I feel that the age, the chosen bands such as Mcfly and target audience may work well together.
Though to improve I think that the idea of using undiscovered artists may slightly limit the target audience you're after, as the use of these artists may not be as mainstream as intended.
I believe the target audience is those of the ages between 16 - 23. I anticipate seeing artists such as: McFly, Katy Perry and Ellie Goulding. To improve, I would make the introduction of the rock aspect more clear. I also feel the price could be raised slightly, although a cheaper price is more attractive to some, it may give off the impression it has little detail. I do like the inclusion of undiscovered artists to appeal to an indie audience.
I believe the target audience is 16-21 and indie mainstream mix I anticipate seeing the following artists; Mcfly and Scouting for girls To improve, have you considered using more well-known artists to fit in with the mainstream target audience
I believe that the target market is 16-26 year old females
ReplyDeleteI anticipate seeing the following artists; Mcfly, Scouting For Girls, Jessie J
To improve have you considered putting your colour scheme for your magazine in your pitch.
Very good, I feel that the age, the chosen bands such as Mcfly and target audience may work well together.
ReplyDeleteThough to improve I think that the idea of using undiscovered artists may slightly limit the target audience you're after, as the use of these artists may not be as mainstream as intended.
I believe the target audience is those of the ages between 16 - 23.
ReplyDeleteI anticipate seeing artists such as: McFly, Katy Perry and Ellie Goulding.
To improve, I would make the introduction of the rock aspect more clear. I also feel the price could be raised slightly, although a cheaper price is more attractive to some, it may give off the impression it has little detail. I do like the inclusion of undiscovered artists to appeal to an indie audience.
I believe the target audience is 16-21 and indie mainstream mix
ReplyDeleteI anticipate seeing the following artists; Mcfly and Scouting for girls
To improve, have you considered using more well-known artists to fit in with the mainstream target audience